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I think having fears can be good.
Of course, too much fears can make people timid but Proper fears can make people cautious.
For example, children who don\'t know that the river is dangerous, won\'t be careful about falling into the river.
If they have fears about falling into the water, they will be careful and won\'t go near the river.
when I was in child I have a lot of fears so, I\'ve never had an accident.
In my case, I wish I was a little less scared, but moderate fear helps us be careful.
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Hello [이름]!
Thank you for your homework. I agree with you. Having a moderate amount of fear can help us be careful and be less careless. Your essay is well-thought-out, so great job!
Regards,
T. Angelica
>>CORRECT.
>> I think having fears can be a good thing.
OR>> I think having fears can be reasonable.
Of course, too much fears can make people timid but Proper fears can make people cautious.
Of course, too much fears can make people timid but Proper fears can make people cautious.
>>Of course, having too many fears can make people timid but proper fears can make people cautious.
For example, children who don\'t know that the river is dangerous, won\'t be careful about falling into the river.
For example, children who don\'t know that the river is dangerous, won\'t be careful about falling into the river.
>>For example, children who don\'t know that the river is dangerous won\'t be careful about falling into the river.
If they have fears about falling into the water, they will be careful and won\'t go near the river.
If they have fears about falling into the water, they will be careful and won\'t go near the river.
>>If they fear falling into the water, they will be careful and won\'t go near the river.
when I was in child I have a lot of fears so, I\'ve never had an accident.
when I was in child I have a lot of fears so, I\'ve never had an accident.
>>When I was a child, I had many fears, so I\'ve never had an accident.
In my case, I wish I was a little less scared, but moderate fear helps us be careful.
In my case, I wish I was a little less scared, but moderate fear helps us be careful.
>>CORRECT.
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