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Last weekend, I went to golf will my cousinz uncle, aunt, mom. And also, I ate toukboki and cup rice after the golf. I also went to see the parrots but they pooped to me, yelled to me, bit be. They were bad parrots.
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I went to golf will my cousinz uncle, aunt, mom.
>>I played golf with my relatives.
I ate toukboki and cup rice after the golf
>>I ate tteokbokki and a cup of rice after playing golf.
They pooped to me, yelled to me, bit be.
>>They pooped at me, and they also yelled at me.
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