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2021-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I really need a friend. Because if I don\'t have friends, I\'ll be depressed all day long. My friends are nice to me and they are fun. I can\'t live without a friend. My friend and I can communicate well and share secrets. I love my friend!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

I really need a friend. Because if I don\'t have friends, I\'ll be depressed all day long.
>> I really need a friend because if I don\'t have friends, I\'ll be depressed all day long.
My friends are nice to me and they are fun.
>> CORRECT!
I can\'t live without a friend.
>> CORRECT!
My friend and I can communicate well and share secrets.
>> My friends and I can communicate well and we share secrets.
I love my friend!
>> I love my friends!

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