HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
The advantages of ride a bus as follows;
1. I can sit down on the bus.
2. I can ride the bus in front of house.
3. I need not change another bus.
I will write the rest of this afternoon.
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Marie~
The advantages of ride a bus as follows;
>> correct1. I can sit down on the bus.>> correct
2. I can ride the bus in front of house.
>> correct
OR >> I can take the bus in front of my house.3. I need not change another bus.>> I don\'t need to transfer to another bus.I will write the rest of this afternoon.
>> I will write the rest of my answers this afternoon.
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