Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When there is an earthquake, I will hide inside the table. I will also put a helmet around the thing that can protect our head or body. After those things, I will go to my mom or call to my mom and go to the safe place.
강사 첨삭
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I will also put a helmet around the thing that can protect our head or body.
>>I will also put a helmet. A helmet is a round thing that can protect our head or body.
After those things, I will go to my mom or call to my mom and go to the safe place
>>After those things, I will go to my mom or call my mom and go to the safe place
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