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I don\'t have any special plans for this Chuseok.
We usually visit our parents\' house.
On the first and second days, I go to my mother-in-law\'s house, and on the third day I go to my parents\' house.
I\'m not going anywhere this Chuseok because of Covid-19.
So I\'m going to take a rest at home and organize my closet or house.
Now is the time to organize our summer clothes and prepare our fall and winter clothes.
And I am going to rest and eat well to get the second vaccine the day after the holiday.
At that time, I hope that you too get a good rest and your laryngitis fully recovers.
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Hi [이름] Mi! ^^
That\'s very thoughtful of you. I hope you have a happy holiday. :)
I don\'t have any special plans for this Chuseok.
>> CORRECT
We usually visit our parents\' house.
>> CORRECT
On the first and second days, I go to my mother-in-law\'s house, and on the third day I go to my parents\' house.
>> On the first two days, I go to my mother-in-law\'s house and on the third day, I go to my parents\' house.
I\'m not going anywhere this Chuseok because of Covid-19.
>> CORRECT
So I\'m going to take a rest at home and organize my closet or house.
>> CORRECT
Now is the time to organize our summer clothes and prepare our fall and winter clothes.
>> CORRECT
And I am going to rest and eat well to get the second vaccine the day after the holiday.
>> CORRECT
At that time, I hope that you too get a good rest and your laryngitis fully recovers.
>> At that time, I hope that you too will get a good rest so your laryngitis will be fully recovered.
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