Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What thing do you have that you can have rented?
-> As I said before, I prefer buying to renting. So I rarely rent anything, but if I have a chance, I want to rent a skin care device.
There is a skin care device that improves skin elasticity, but I was surprised that the price was too high. It\'s too expensive to buy it, so I want to rent it and use it.
강사 첨삭
Hello Bo Im, it\'s a new week!
This skin care machine is very interesting. I wonder what it does exactly and how much it costs. Well, in my question, I actually mean to ask what one thing do you have or possess that you can have others rent it from you. Anyway, you made all correct sentences below. I am glad that you structured your sentences really well here on this short paragraph.
I will see you in class later, thank you for sending me this answer!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
There is a skin care device that improves skin elasticity, but I was surprised that the price was too high. It\'s too expensive to buy it, so I want to rent it and use it.
So I rarely rent anything, but if I have a chance, I want to rent a skin care device.
>> Correct!
There is a skin care device that improves skin elasticity, but I was surprised that the price was too high. It\'s too expensive to buy it, so I want to rent it and use it.
>> Correct!
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