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2012-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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2012.02.09 We were disappointed with the restaurant. The food was really awful. (real) The footballer's performances got steadily better as he got fitter. (steady) Walk carefully - the stairs are wet and slippery. (careful) You shouldn't work so hard . You'll have a heart attack one of these days. (hard). I've decided to fire Steve Jones. He arrived late for the meeting again. (late). I will go to ski this Saturday. I need ski equipment. But I had not ski equipment First I bought ski wear. It sold very cheaply on the internet. The product review was not too bad. But the ski pants is thin. I will wear two tights in pants. I imagine the look that I'm skiing.

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Hello Miss. [Name],happy Thursday!:) Thank you for making your homework as always... I\'m always happy to know that you still manage to keep tract of your homeworks though you\'re very busy.. I commend you for a job well done Miss. [Name]. I made some corrections on some of your sentences, just read and study the following: Talk to you again later Miss. [Name].. Teacher Cam^^   We were disappointed with the restaurant. The food was really awful. (real) >>correct!The footballer\'s performances got steadily better as he got fitter. (steady) >>correct!Walk carefully - the stairs are wet and slippery. (careful) >>correct!You shouldn\'t work so hard . You\'ll have a heart attack one of these days. (hard). >>correct!I\'ve decided to fire Steve Jones. He arrived late for the meeting again. (late).>>correct!I will go to ski this Saturday.>>correct!I need ski equipment. But I had not ski equipment >>I need some ski equipments but I don\'t have anything.First I bought ski wear. >>correct!It sold very cheaply on the internet. >>It was sold cheaply on the internet.The product review was not too bad. >>correct!But the ski pants is thin. >>correct!I will wear two tights in pants. >>correct!I imagine the look that I\'m skiing. >>I imagine the look I have while doing the ski.  

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