Homework &
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2012.02.09
We were disappointed with the restaurant. The food was really awful. (real)
The footballer's performances got steadily better as he got fitter. (steady)
Walk carefully - the stairs are wet and slippery. (careful)
You shouldn't work so hard . You'll have a heart attack one of these days. (hard).
I've decided to fire Steve Jones. He arrived late for the meeting again. (late).
I will go to ski this Saturday.
I need ski equipment. But I had not ski equipment
First I bought ski wear.
It sold very cheaply on the internet.
The product review was not too bad.
But the ski pants is thin.
I will wear two tights in pants.
I imagine the look that I'm skiing.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name],happy Thursday!:)
Thank you for making your homework as always...
I\'m always happy to know that you still manage to keep tract of your homeworks though you\'re very busy..
I commend you for a job well done Miss. [Name].
I made some corrections on some of your sentences, just read and study the following:
Talk to you again later Miss. [Name]..
Teacher Cam^^
We were disappointed with the restaurant. The food was really awful. (real) >>correct!The footballer\'s performances got steadily better as he got fitter. (steady) >>correct!Walk carefully - the stairs are wet and slippery. (careful) >>correct!You shouldn\'t work so hard . You\'ll have a heart attack one of these days. (hard). >>correct!I\'ve decided to fire Steve Jones. He arrived late for the meeting again. (late).>>correct!I will go to ski this Saturday.>>correct!I need ski equipment. But I had not ski equipment
>>I need some ski equipments but I don\'t have anything.First I bought ski wear.
>>correct!It sold very cheaply on the internet.
>>It was sold cheaply on the internet.The product review was not too bad.
>>correct!But the ski pants is thin.
>>correct!I will wear two tights in pants.
>>correct!I imagine the look that I\'m skiing.
>>I imagine the look I have while doing the ski.
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