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2021-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I like wearing hanbok on New Year\'s and Chuseok. Because I really like wearing hanbok. When I wear Hanbok, I feel like I\'m a princess of a historical drama. Hanbok is very attractive. I love Hanbok. Teacher Cristina ! Have you ever worn Hanbok?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I like wearing hanbok on New Year\'s and Chuseok.

>> I like wearing Hanbok on New Year\'s Day and Chuseok.

Because I really like wearing hanbok.

>> This is because I really like wearing Hanbok.
When I wear Hanbok, I feel like I\'m a princess of a historical drama. 

>> When I wear a Hanbok, I feel like I\'m a princess of a historical drama. 

Hanbok is very attractive.

>> CORRECT!
I love Hanbok. 

>> CORRECT!

Teacher Cristina ! Have you ever worn Hanbok?

>> Teacher Christina! Have you ever worn a Hanbok?


~~~~ Not yet, I haven\'t worn a Hanbok yet but I would like to try it someday. ^^

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