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2021-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Since I\'m still a student, I think I have the most time to study no matter how much I play games or hobbies. But I think I\'m playing games and hobbies enough. I don\'t think life is bad right now. What about you?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Since I\'m still a student, I think I have the most time to study no matter how much I play games or hobbies.

>> Since I\'m still a student, I think I spend most of my time studying, no matter how much I play games or do my hobbies.
But I think I\'m playing games and hobbies enough.

>> But I think I play games and do my hobbies just enough.
I don\'t think life is bad right now.
>> CORRECT!
What about you?

>> CORRECT!

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