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What is your favorite fashion? What kind of clothes do you love to wear?
-->I like styles that are not too formal because formal styles are uncomfortable when I work, so I like semi-formal fashion style. I usually wear pants and like cotton tops that absorb sweat well.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Bo Im!
These kinds of style are basic and needs to be worn all the time to move better and feel more comfortable specially during a hot or a cold weather. Fashion needs to be practical and convenient at the same time. Of course there are times when we need to dress up and that time, we need to dress for the occassion.
Thank you for this answer. See you!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
I usually wear pants and like cotton tops that absorb sweat well.
>> Correct!
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