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2021-09-29 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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More than anything, it was nice to meet my cousins during Chuseok. I ate a lot of rice cakes! I like rice cakes. Teacher! Have you tried the rice cake? I ate rice cake called janji rice cake the most. It\'s because the rice cake has sweet red beans inside and the rice cake is soft.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


More than anything, it was nice to meet my cousins during Chuseok.

>> CORRECT!
I ate a lot of rice cakes! 

>> CORRECT!

I like rice cakes.

>> CORRECT!
Teacher! Have you tried the rice cake?

>> CORRECT!
I ate rice cake called janji rice cake the most.

>> I ate the rice cake called janji rice cake the most.
It\'s because the rice cake has sweet red beans inside and the rice cake is soft.

>> CORRECT!

OR

>> It\'s because the rice cake has sweet red beans inside and it is soft.


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Rice cakes sound so delicious but sadly, I haven\'t tried one yet. I hope one day soon I\'ll get the chance to taste one.^^

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