HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
More than anything, it was nice to meet my cousins during Chuseok.
>> CORRECT!
I ate a lot of rice cakes!
>> CORRECT!
I like rice cakes.
>> CORRECT!
Teacher! Have you tried the rice cake?
>> CORRECT!
I ate rice cake called janji rice cake the most.
>> I ate the rice cake called janji rice cake the most.
It\'s because the rice cake has sweet red beans inside and the rice cake is soft.
>> CORRECT!
OR
>> It\'s because the rice cake has sweet red beans inside and it is soft.
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Rice cakes sound so delicious but sadly, I haven\'t tried one yet. I hope one day soon I\'ll get the chance to taste one.^^
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