Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Last weekend, I went to my cousin brother\'s house. I played a bit of badminton and game. But that\'s not the highlight is Sunday. I went to play at 1 o\'clock and play until 5 o\'clock with my friends!!
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
I played a bit of badminton and game.
>>I played a bit of badminton and I also played some games.
But that\'s not the highlight is Sunday.
>>But that\'s not the highlight last Sunday.
I went to play at 1 o\'clock and play until 5 o\'clock with my friends!!
>>I played a bit of badminton and I also played some games.
But that\'s not the highlight is Sunday.
>>But that\'s not the highlight last Sunday.
I went to play at 1 o\'clock and play until 5 o\'clock with my friends!!
>>I played at 1 o\'clock and I played until 5 o\'clock with my friends!!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.