Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your favorit hobby?
-> My favorit hobby is reading web novels. Whenever I have time, I like to read web novels on my smartphone. Also there is a TV drama named Hometown Chachacha that I am into these days. One of the hobbies is to look up the drama video when you have time.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Bo Im!
Your hobbies are very entertaining. After all, you work so hard during the day and every once in a while, you will need some time to escape from your busy schedule.
On your short paragraph, your sentences were all correct. Well done! I hope that you will continue writing short and meaningful ones and extend them to longer sentences when needed. See you!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Or: favorite
Whenever I have time, I like to read web novels on my smartphone.
>> Correct!
Also there is a TV drama named Hometown Chachacha that I am into these days.
>> Correct!
One of the hobbies is to look up the drama video when you have time.
>> Correct!
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