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My memorable holiday when I was 10.
I went to Jeju with my family.
I ate black pork and fish and it was delicious.
I had a great times with my family so I think the most memorable holiday.
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My memorable holiday when I was 10.
>> My most memorable holiday happened when I was 10 years old.
I went to Jeju with my family.
I went to Jeju with my family.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I went to Jeju Island with my family.
I ate black pork and fish and it was delicious.
I ate black pork and fish and it was delicious.
>> CORRECT!
I had a great times with my family so I think the most memorable holiday.
I had a great times with my family so I think the most memorable holiday.
>> I had a great time with my family, so I think that was my most memorable holiday.
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