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2021-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Q:HOMEWORK: Kindly answer the following in essay form. How different do you think is the generation now from the generation before? A:I think it\'s changed a lot digitally.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! :)

The difference between the older generation and new generation really is the technology. Because the older generation does not have that much technology. Despite that, people learn easily to adapt to the certain changes that are happening.

I think your answer is great. :)
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1. I think it\'s changed a lot digitally.

>>CORRECT

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