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2021-09-29 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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The biggest fear was going to the dentist. Of course, it\'s a place that children hate. I got goosebumps when I was pulling out my teeth. one more I got goosebumps when I got rid of the cavity treatment for the first time. What about you teacher?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


The biggest fear was going to the dentist.

>> The biggest fear I had was going to the dentist.
Of course, it\'s a place that children hate.

>> CORRECT!
I got goosebumps when I was pulling out my teeth.

>> I got goosebumps when the dentist was pulling out my teeth.
one more I got goosebumps when I got rid of the cavity treatment for the first time.
>> One more thing I got goosebumps from was when I got the cavity treatment for the first time.
What about you teacher?

>> CORRECT!


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My biggest fear when I was a child was getting lost.

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