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2021-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I want to live as an artist on my next life. To be an artist was one of my biggest my goals, but I couldn’t achieve it. Because I thought that I was not a talented and creative person. However, I always admired famous artists’ life and their great works. If I can live my life again, I want to learn something artistic.

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Hi [이름]:)

Some people want to live a different life and some don\'t. At the end of the day, what matters is that we should be contented with the life that we have right now. :) 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I want to live as an artist on my next life. 
>>I want to live as an artist in my next life. 

To be an artist was one of my biggest my goals, but I couldn’t achieve it. 
>> CORRECT

Because I thought that I was not a talented and creative person. 
>> It is because  I thought I was not a talented and creative person. 

However, I always admired famous artists’ life and their great works. 
>> CORRECT

If I can live my life again, I want to learn something artistic. 
>> CORRECT

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