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I want to live as an artist on my next life. To be an artist was one of my biggest my goals, but I couldn’t achieve it. Because I thought that I was not a talented and creative person. However, I always admired famous artists’ life and their great works. If I can live my life again, I want to learn something artistic.
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Some people want to live a different life and some don\'t. At the end of the day, what matters is that we should be contented with the life that we have right now. :)
I want to live as an artist on my next life.
>>I want to live as an artist in my next life.
To be an artist was one of my biggest my goals, but I couldn’t achieve it.
>> CORRECT
Because I thought that I was not a talented and creative person.
>> It is because I thought I was not a talented and creative person.
However, I always admired famous artists’ life and their great works.
>> CORRECT
If I can live my life again, I want to learn something artistic.
>> CORRECT
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