Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I expect to speak longer english sentences.
And I hope I can speak English more fluently even if it takes long time.
Teacher Sharon and I can practice many expression using new words.
And the last expectation of this class is that we can enjoy the class.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]ny!
Thank you for your composition today.
Take note of the suggestions below.
You can ask any questions in class.
Keep up the good work!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I expect to speak longer english sentences.
>> I expect to speak longer English sentences.
And I hope I can speak English more fluently even if it takes long time.
And I hope I can speak English more fluently even if it takes long time.
>> I also hope to speak English more fluently even if it takes a long time.
Teacher Sharon and I can practice many expression using new words.
Teacher Sharon and I can practice many expression using new words.
>> Teacher Sharon and I can practice many expressions using new words.
And the last expectation of this class is that we can enjoy the class.
And the last expectation of this class is that we can enjoy the class.
>> The last expectation for this class is that we can enjoy the class.
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