homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:Kindly answer the following in essay form.
Why do you think there are some couples in South Korea that don\'t want to have kids?
A:I think it\'s different for each person.I don\'t know in detail.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
A growing number of couples who have been married for five years or less, especially those in which both partners work, are not having children. This is actually a personal choice but there are some consequences to the society, which is the decreasing economy.
I think it\'s different for each person.I don\'t know in detail.
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