Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Wow! Your writing is very good today. I think you think maturely for your age and that\'s a good thing. Thanks for sharing your ideas. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
I think it depends on the situation.
>>CORRECT!
Sometimes we need to express our emotions such as anger.
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Especially for anger, if we keep suppressing it, one day, it will explode and we might explode in the worst way such as yelling, or even worse, we might destroy objects.
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If we suppress our emotions too much, it might damage our mental health too.
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Although, there is also a line in anger and we must not cross the line.
>>Although, there is a limit to anger and we must not cross the line.
As long as not crossing the line, we can express anger.
>>As long as we don\'t cross the line, we can express anger.
But of course, we sure need to express anger not too often.
>>But of course, we have to make sure we don\'t express anger too often.
My opinions are like above and I will emphasize that sometimes we can express anger but not too often.
>>CORRECT!
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