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Question. With a busy life, hard to find time alone. Where do you usually go in order to find your own time alone? Before, sleeping time, I'm have a personal time in my bed. Think about my future. (Dream, Family, School) In these latter days, think about severe cold. Severe cold set in all over the country. My younger brother was enter the army two month ago. (In Korea, Every young man has to go to army) I'm really worry about my younger brother. last weekend, My family visited army to see a my brother! There was very cold. Well, I felt like I never wanted to go into the army (laughs). But, my brother said to me "It is a good experience for me since I have to go to military service myself someday." He was an imposing figure at that time. Anyway, I'm very worry about severe cold weather owing to my brother.

Hello there [이름]! Thank you for sharing your composition! I had fun reading it. These past few days, it has been very cold so keep yourself warm. T. Faye Question. With a busy life, hard to find time alone. Where do you usually go in order to find your own time alone?>>CORRECTBefore, sleeping time, I\'m have a personal time in my bed. >> Before sleeping time, I have a personal time on my bed.Think about my future. (Dream, Family, School)>> I think about my future. (Dream, Family, School)In these latter days, think about severe cold. >> In these latter days, I thought about severe cold.Severe cold set in all over the country. >>CORRECTMy younger brother was enter the army two month ago. >> My younger brother entered the army two months ago.(In Korea, Every young man has to go to army)>>CORRECTI\'m really worry about my younger brother.>> I\'m really worried about my younger brother. OR >> I really worry about my younger brother. last weekend, My family visited army to see a my brother! >>L ast weekend, my family visited the army to see a my brother.There was very cold. >> It was very cold there.Well, I felt like I never wanted to go into the army (laughs).>>CORRECTBut, my brother said to me \"It is a good experience for me since I have to go to military service myself someday.\">>CORRECTHe was an imposing figure at that time.>>CORRECTAnyway, I\'m very worry about severe cold weather owing to my brother. >> Anyway, I\'m very worried about the severe cold weather owing to my brother. OR >> Anyway, I\'m very worried about the severe cold weather for my brother.