Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Who do you think advertise better? : LG or AW?
--> AW company does not advertise on TV, but takes a method in which individuals who have used the product advertise themselves and return their profits.
That\'s why LG is advertising much more through mass media.
From my point of view, I am advertising AW products because it is my business.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Bo Im!
Your sentences are all correct, congratulations! In whichever way these two products and companies advertise, you are a winner because you are earning so much from them both. So, I hope that these companies will still soar in the market for a long time and so do you!
Thank you for this answer! See you tomorrow.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
That\'s why LG is advertising much more through mass media.
>> Correct!
From my point of view, I am advertising AW products because it is my business.
>> Correct!
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