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I like desert is a melon ice flakes with syrup.
It is so sweet and little sour tastes.
Because inside this yogurt powder.
Also, I like strawberry yogurt smoothie
It is sweet and good after lunch or dinner
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~ T. Camille>> My favorite dessert is melon flakes with syrup.
It is so sweet and little sour tastes.
It is so sweet and little sour tastes.
>> It tastes sweet and a little sour.
Because inside this yogurt powder.
Because inside this yogurt powder.
>> There\'s a yogurt powder inside it.
Also, I like strawberry yogurt smoothie.
Also, I like strawberry yogurt smoothie.
>> CORRECT!
It is sweet and good after lunch or dinner.
It is sweet and good after lunch or dinner.
>> CORRECT!
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