homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

It\'s not my favorite book, but it\'s a book that I enjoyed reading. 

>> CORRECT!

The book\'s name is \"Dollar Gut\'s Dream Department Store\". 

>> CORRECT!

Literally, it\'s a place that sells dreams. 

>> CORRECT!

OR

>> It\'s literally a place that sells dreams.

I want to go to this place in personally.

>> CORRECT!
So If I go there I will buy happy or cat dream.

>> If I go there, I will buy a happy or a dream about cats.