Homework
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I want to get a lot of money. I will but all the thing that I can have. I think I will buy a lot of home and cars. That is a smart idea that we can buy all the gifts I want.
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I will but all the thing that I can have.
>>>I will buy all the things that I want.
I think I will buy a lot of home and cars.
>>>I think I will buy different houses and cars.
That is a smart idea that we can buy all the gifts I want.
>>>That is a smart idea if we can buy all the gifts that I want.
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