Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What kind of first impression do you want to make toward others?
--> I want to be a comfortable person when I meet someone for the first time.
That is why I should smile when I meet others at first. Frankly with you, it is a littel difficult to be smiling when I meet someone at first, because I feel awkward at that time.
강사 첨삭
Hello Bo Im!
Being comfortable means being confident and open to some great possibilities when meeting people for the first time. Who knows, they will be a part of our lives for a very long time as business partners, colleagues, among others. A bright smile and a sincere greeting can help.
Well done on your answer! See you later.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
That is why I should smile when I meet others at first.
>> Correct!
Frankly with you, it is a littel difficult to be smiling when I meet someone at first, because I feel awkward at that time.
>> To be frank with you, it is a little difficult to be smiling when I meet someone at first, because I feel awkward at that time.
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