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2021-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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I recommend the food and fashion Because I think fashion is most Korean wear similar style clothes. So tourists wear to Korean style. And I recommend food is Tteokbokki. Because tteokbokki is spicy and sweet so very delicious.

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~ T. Camille

I recommend the food and fashion
>> I recommend the food and fashion in my country.
Because I think fashion is most Korean wear similar style clothes.
>> It is because I think fashion is most Korean wear similar style clothes.
So tourists wear to Korean style.
>> So tourists wear the Korean style of clothing.
And I recommend food is Tteokbokki.
>> I also recommend the food Tteokbokki.
Because tteokbokki is spicy and sweet so very delicious.
>> I recommend this food because it is spicy, sweet, and so delicious.

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