homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. What do you do for fun at the beach?
People usually swim in the sea or walk on the sand
2. What things do you always need to bring when you go to the beach?
You should bring a swimsuit when you go to the beach
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1. What do you do for fun at the beach?
People usually swim in the sea or walk on the sand.
People usually swim in the sea or walk on the sand.
>> CORRECT
2. What things do you always need to bring when you go to the beach?
You should bring a swimsuit when you go to the beach
2. What things do you always need to bring when you go to the beach?
You should bring a swimsuit when you go to the beach
>> CORRECT
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