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2021-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I read a book called \"wimpikid\". that is book about a elementary student’s story It is comic book so I like this book I read it with a laugh. haha I recommend it !

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I read a book called \"wimpikid\".

>> I read a book called \"Diary Of A Wimpy Kid\".
that is book about a elementary student’s story

>> That is a book about an elementary school student’s story.
It is comic book so I like this book

>> It is a comic book so I like this book.
I read it with a laugh. haha I recommend it !

>> I read it with a laugh and I recommend it.

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