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I want to change drinking culture. In Korea, there is a culture in which superior force underling to drink. I think this culture is bad, so it should be changed in the future.
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Hi Ka [이름]:)
Korea\'s culture is actually great. But like any other cultures, it also has flaws. Some people want to prolong it and some don\'t. It is always different based on people\'s perspectives.
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I want to change drinking culture.
>> I want to change the drinking culture.
In Korea, there is a culture in which superior force underling to drink.
>> In Korea, there is a culture in which the superior forces the underlings to drink.
I think this culture is bad, so it should be changed in the future.
>> CORRECT
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