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I think Korean fashion is very simple.
Many people almost fashion very smilar.
But I think fluorescent shorts is awkward.
Because only pants are eye catching.
And anything T-shirt not balance.
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I think Korean fashion is very simple.
>> CORRECT!
Many people almost fashion very smilar.
>> Many people almost have the same fashion sense.
OR >> Many people almost have the same kind of style.
But I think fluorescent shorts is awkward.
>> CORRECT!
Because only pants are eye catching.>> It is because only pants are eye-catching.
And anything T-shirt not balance.
>> The shirt makes the outfit unproportionate.
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