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I think my bad behavior is postpone the assignment. In order to change this bad habit, I should have a habit of finishing it on that day. But this is very hard for me.
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Bad habits interrupt your life and prevent you from accomplishing your goals. They jeopardize your health - both mentally and physically. And they waste your time and energy.
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I think my bad behavior is postpone the assignment.
>> I think my bad behavior is not doing my assignments on time.
In order to change this bad habit, I should have a habit of finishing it on that day.
>> In order to change this bad habit, I should have a habit of finishing it on time.
But this is very hard for me.
>> CORRECT
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