Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your favorite cafe theme aside from Starbucks?
--> There is a famous cafe called Terrarosa in Gangneung which is a eastern city of Korea.
The reason why Terrarosa is famous is that the taste of coffee is very good.
I have been there about three times whenever I visit in Gangeneung, the atmosphere of that cafe is very warm and cozy.
We could enjoy delicious bake with coffee there. That moment was perfect healing time.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Bo Im!
This is a very good place to be! I think one gets to appreciate him or herself more when this person goes to this kind of place.
Thanks for sending this homework! See you in a few.
-T. Donna =)
>> There is a famous cafe called Terrarosa in Gangneung which is an eastern city of Korea.
The reason why Terrarosa is famous is that the taste of coffee is very good.
The reason why Terrarosa is famous is that the taste of coffee is very good.
>> Correct!
I have been there about three times whenever I visit in Gangeneung, the atmosphere of that cafe is very warm and cozy.
>> Correct!
Or: I have been there about three times whenever I visit Gangeneung and the atmosphere of that cafe is very warm and cozy.
We could enjoy delicious bake with coffee there.
>> We could enjoy delicious baked goodies with coffee there.
That moment was perfect healing time.
>> That moment is a perfect healing time.
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