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I think it\'s different for each country to country.
In Korea, I think doctor is one of the most well-paid job.
Because doctor is deals with life.
So more stress and more feel responsible than other job.
And doctor receives overtime pay, night pay but it\'s case by case.
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I think it\'s different for each country to country.
>> I think it\'s different for each country.
In Korea, I think doctor is one of the most well-paid job.
>> In Korea, I think a doctor is one of the most well-paid jobs.
Because doctor is deals with life.
>> That is because doctors deal with life.
So more stress and more feel responsible than other job.
>> They receive more stress and have more responsibility than other jobs.
And doctor receives overtime pay, night pay but it\'s case by case.
>> And, doctors receive overtime pay and night pay, but it\'s case by case.
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