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2021-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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1. What bedtime story was your favorite when you were young? My favorite bedtime story was Snow White 2. At what age did you stop believing in fairy tales? I stopped believing in fairy tales when I was 7years old

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1. What bedtime story was your favorite when you were young?
My favorite bedtime story was Snow White

>> My favorite bedtime story when I was a kid was Snow white.

2. At what age did you stop believing in fairy tales?
I stopped believing in fairy tales when I was 7years old

>> I stopped believing in fairy tales when I was 7 years old.

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