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2021-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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There is no one who is most annoying to me, but the personality of the person I hate is someone who has no manners. Because people who are rude usually have a bad personality.

강사 첨삭

Hello Stella!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


There is no one who is most annoying to me, but the personality of the person.

>> There is no one who is more annoying than a person with bad personality.

I hate is someone who has no manners. Because people who are rude usually have a bad personality.

>> I hate someone who has no manners because people who are rude usually have a bad personality.

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