homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
What makes me happy is my family and cat.
>> What makes me happy is my family and cats.
It\'s weird that a family and a cat stand shoulder to shoulder.
>> It\'s weird that a family and a cat equally makes me happy.
Anyway, when I\'m with my family or when I see a cat, there\'s an ANDOLPIN. !!
>> Anyway, when I\'m with my family or when I see a cat, I feel endorphins!
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Hi [이름], I think what you mean by \"andolpin\" is \"ENDORPHINS\".
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