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2012-02-14 · 첨삭 강사 Razel

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Fill in the blanks.Choose if it's life, lives or live. Example: Do you believe in _____ after death? Answer: life Three____ were lost in the fire. @ lives Do you like to ____ in the North? @ live Have you bought the DVD with the ____recording of the U2 concert? @ lives Peter still ____ with his parents. @ lives My father's words have lived with me all my ____. @ life. Hi, Razel, I'm listening a song titled 'I've got a crush on you' It's so sweet. I think it is a perfect song for Valentine day. If i have a boy friend i will sing for him. Sadly, i've got no one. Maybe you could try. kkk Have a happy Valentine day~ See you tommorrow.

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Hi [이름]mie!!..Good job!! Your homework was close to perfect. Keep it up. II have listened to the song and it\'s really sweet. hope you\'ll find the right person to sing that song ^_^.Don\'t worry, the right person will come at the right time:) Thank you for that nice composition. T. Razel HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Fill in the blanks.Choose if it\'s life, lives or live.Example:Do you believe in _____ after death?Answer:lifeThree____ were lost in the fire.@ lives>>CORRECTDo you like to ____ in the North?@ live>>CORRECTHave you bought the DVD with the ____recording of the U2 concert?@ lives>> LIVEPeter still ____ with his parents.@ lives>>CORRECTMy father\'s words have lived with me all my ____. @ life. >>CORRECTHi, Razel, >> CORRECTI\'m listening a song titled \'I\'ve got a crush on you\' >> I\'m listenning to a song entitled \"I\'ve got a crush on you\" It\'s so sweet. >>CORRECTI think it is a perfect song for Valentine day. >>I think it is a perfect song for Valentine\'s day.If i have a boy friend i will sing for him. >>CORRECTSadly, i\'ve got no one. Maybe you could try. kkk >> CORRECTHave a happy Valentine day~ >>Have a happy Valentine\'s day~See you tommorrow. >> CORRECT

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