homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to live a long time if my body and mind are healthy.
I think it’s the best life what until I can work happily and I can help others
This is my life what I want.
강사 첨삭
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>>Correct.
>>OR: I want to live longer if my I am healthy physically, mentally, and emotionally.
I think it’s the best life what until I can work happily and I can help others
>>I think it will be the best life I can have because I can work happily as well as helping others while I am living.
This is my life what I want.
>>This is what I want to do with my life.
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