Homework
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1. How do you celebrate Christmas in your country?
In Korea, I spend Christmas with my family.
2. What Christmas gift do you want to get this year?
I want to have a computer at Christmas.
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1. How do you celebrate Christmas in your country?
In Korea, I spend Christmas with my family.
In Korea, I spend Christmas with my family.
>> In South Korea, I spend Christmas with my family.
2. What Christmas gift do you want to get this year?
I want to have a computer at Christmas.
>> I want to have a computer for Christmas.
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