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I prefer to have a vegetable garden.
Because I think vegetable is I can eat but flower is can just see.
So vegetable garden I like tham flower garden.
I will my vegetable garden grow strawberry.
And my vegetable garden is full of fruit and vegetable.
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I prefer to have a vegetable garden.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I would like to have a vegetable garden.
Because I think vegetable is I can eat but flower is can just see.
Because I think vegetable is I can eat but flower is can just see.
>> I think if I have a vegetable garden, I can eat the vegetables, but for flowers, I can just look at it.
So vegetable garden I like tham flower garden.
So vegetable garden I like tham flower garden.
>> That is why I prefer a vegetable garden than a flower garden.
I will my vegetable garden grow strawberry.
>> I will also plant fruits like strawberries, in my garden.
And my vegetable garden is full of fruit and vegetable.
>> I want my garden to be full of fruits and vegetables.
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