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Is it necessary to have a bucket list?
--> I\'m not sure if I need a bucket list I want to achieve before I die, but I think it\'s necessary to write down my dreams I want to achieve in my life.
I have never imagined myself dying, so I am writing down what I want to achieve in my life as dreams not bucket lists.
I think it is necessary to write down dreams.
When I look at the dream list I wrote down again a few years later, I am very happy to find that there is a dream that has already come true.
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Hi there Bo Im!
It can be surprising that the things we have today were the ones we have wished yesterday. By having a list, we can keep track of what have been accomplished as well as the things we still need to work hard for.
I am sure you have achieved so many things from your list. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this topic.
See you soon!
-T. Donna =)
I\'m not sure if I need a bucket list I want to achieve before I die, but I think it\'s necessary to write down my dreams I want to achieve in my life.
I have never imagined myself dying, so I am writing down what I want to achieve in my life as dreams not bucket lists.
I think it is necessary to write down dreams.
When I look at the dream list I wrote down again a few years later, I am very happy to find that there is a dream that has already come true.
>> Correct!
I have never imagined myself dying, so I am writing down what I want to achieve in my life as dreams not bucket lists.
>> Correct!
I think it is necessary to write down dreams.
>> Correct!
When I look at the dream list I wrote down again a few years later, I am very happy to find that there is a dream that has already come true.
>> Correct!
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