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I will never visit place is too hot or too cold.
Because my country not too hot or too cold.
So I can\'t adjust there.
And too cold or too hot not interesting for me.
I think I\'ll only think about the weather.
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I will never visit place is too hot or too cold.
>> I will never visit the places that are too hot or too cold.
OR >> The places that I will never visit are the places that are too hot or too cold.
Because my country not too hot or too cold.
Because my country not too hot or too cold.
>> That\'s because my country\'s weather is not too hot nor too cold.
So I can\'t adjust there.
So I can\'t adjust there.
>> I can\'t easily adjust there.
OR >> I can\'t easily adjust in those places.
And too cold or too hot not interesting for me.
And too cold or too hot not interesting for me.
>> Also, places that are too cold or too hot for me is not interesting.
I think I\'ll only think about the weather.
I think I\'ll only think about the weather.
>> I guess I\'ll only think about the weather.
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