Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What movie affected your life?
--> The most memorable movie I have ever seen is Titanic.
It was a movie that was released when I was in university, I was so impressed that I watched it twice.
The love story of the two main characters in the movie was so beautiful, but the warning about the lack of readiness of the Titanic team, which was unprepared in an accident, was impressive.
강사 첨삭
Hello Bo Im!
This movie based on the true accounts of the ship Titanic is one of the best movies of all time. Not only that Leonardo di Caprio was really handsome, but also, their acting and the film production was absolutely fascinating and impeccable. This proves that that movies remain to be one of the best escapes from our very worlds.
Thank you for explaining your answer so well. See you again later in class!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
It was a movie that was released when I was in university, I was so impressed that I watched it twice.
>> Correct!
The love story of the two main characters in the movie was so beautiful, but the warning about the lack of readiness of the Titanic team, which was unprepared in an accident, was impressive.
The love story of the two main characters in the movie was so beautiful, but the warning about the lack of readiness of the Titanic team, which was unprepared in an accident, was impressive.
>> The love story of the two main characters in the movie was so beautiful, but the warning about the lack of readiness of the Titanic team, which was being unprepared in an accident, was depressing.
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