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I think the best city is Goyang city.
Goyang city has many convenient facilities.
There are quality academies and schools.
besides there are quality culture centers.
This city is near the Seoul city but there is not crowded.
That\'t why I thought like above.
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I think the best city is Goyang city.
>> I think the best city is Goyang City.
Goyang city has many convenient facilities.
Goyang city has many convenient facilities.
>> Goyang City has many convenient facilities.
There are quality academies and schools.
There are quality academies and schools.
>> Correct
besides there are quality culture centers.
besides there are quality culture centers.
>> There are quality culture centers.
This city is near the Seoul city but there is not crowded.
This city is near the Seoul city but there is not crowded.
>> This city is near Seoul but it\'s not crowded.
That\'t why I thought like above.
That\'t why I thought like above.
>> That\'s why I thought the same way.
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