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What would you say is worth giving up everything you have?
I'm a graduate student. So My major Study is very important to me whatever.
But, my x-boyfriend don't understand me.
(Sometime, Art student have to Evening work for a drawing.)
He doesn't want to latch onto that I don't have enough time to meet him in trial period. So, I broke up with him.
I Think I will repend it sooner or later.
But, I think I have a right decision in this time.
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What would you say is worth giving up everything you have?I\'m a graduate student.
>>Correct
So My major Study is very important to me whatever.
>>Studying is the most important thing for me.But, my x-boyfriend don\'t understand me.
>>Correct(Sometime, Art student have to Evening work for a drawing.)
>>Sometimes, an art student has an evening work it is drawing.He doesn\'t want to latch onto that I don\'t have enough time to meet him in trial period.
>>He doesn\'t want to believe me that I don\'t have enough time to meet him because of studies.
So, I broke up with him.
>>CorrectI Think I will repend it sooner or later.
>>I think I will regret it sooner or later.But, I think I have a right decision in this time.
>>But I think I had the right decision this time.
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