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2012-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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What would you say is worth giving up everything you have? I'm a graduate student. So My major Study is very important to me whatever. But, my x-boyfriend don't understand me. (Sometime, Art student have to Evening work for a drawing.) He doesn't want to latch onto that I don't have enough time to meet him in trial period. So, I broke up with him. I Think I will repend it sooner or later. But, I think I have a right decision in this time.

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Hi! How are you? Happy Valentine\'s Day!Thank you for sending me your composition. You did a great job! Keep it up! Take Care Always! Teacher Faye What would you say is worth giving up everything you have?I\'m a graduate student. >>Correct So My major Study is very important to me whatever. >>Studying is the most important thing for me.But, my x-boyfriend don\'t understand me. >>Correct(Sometime, Art student have to Evening work for a drawing.) >>Sometimes, an art student has an evening work it is drawing.He doesn\'t want to latch onto that I don\'t have enough time to meet him in trial period. >>He doesn\'t want to believe me that I don\'t have enough time to meet him because of studies. So, I broke up with him. >>CorrectI Think I will repend it sooner or later. >>I think I will regret it sooner or later.But, I think I have a right decision in this time. >>But I think I had the right decision this time.

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