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I want to be an eagle when I become an animal.
Because eagles are big and strong.When an animal is big and strong, it can not be eaten by an animal and can hunt for preys to eat food.
Next, they can fly. I want to get wings and fly, so I can travel the whole environment.
I envy the eagles because of this. I want to be a eagle.
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For me, I like to be a fish so I can learn how to swim.
I was amazed when you said eagle. What a great answer1
Teacher Andrea
>> I want to be an eagle when i become an animal because they are big and strong.
When an animal is big and strong,
>> When an animal is big and strong.
it can not be eaten by an animal and can hunt for preys to eat food.
>> It can not be eaten by an animal and can hunt for preys to eat food.
Next, they can fly.
Next, they can fly.
>> Correct
I want to get wings and fly, so I can travel the whole environment.
>> I want to get wings and fly, so I can travel the whole world.
I envy the eagles because of this.
>> I envy the eagles because of these reasons.
I want to be a eagle.
>> I want to be an eagle
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