homework
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If I were an actor I like to have heroine main character. Because I can have a large dose. And can help people. Viewer can remember me long. I think mostly people like to have heroine main character.
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If I were an actor I like to have heroine main character.
>> If I were an actor, I would like to be a heroine.
Because I can have a large dose.
>> I\'m sorry. What do you mean by large dose?
And can help people.
>> Moreover, I could help people.
Viewer can remember me long.
>> Viewers could remember me longer.
I think mostly people like to have heroine main character.
>> I think most people like heroines.
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