Homework

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think our hometown\'s main attraction is having many stores near apartments. 

>> CORRECT!

Based on my house, an convenience stores is 3 minutes away. 

>> Based on where my house is, a convenience store is just 3 minutes away. 

In 7 minutes, there is two small shopping mall. So we can live conveniently.

>> If you walk for 7 minutes, you\'ll find two small shopping malls. 

So we can live conveniently.

>> That\'s why we can live conveniently here.